Friday, July 27, 2007

may i feel?

This couple was decidedly not patient(especially he!).  It is however my second favorite poem.

may i feel said he

by e.e. cummings
 

 may i feel said he
(i'll squeal said she
just once said he)
it's fun said she

(may i touch said he
how much said she
a lot said he)
why not said she

(let's go said he
not too far said she
what's too far said he
where you are said she)

may i stay said he
which way said she
like this said he
if you kiss said she

may i move said he
is it love said she)
if you're willing said he
(but you're killing said she

but it's life said he
but your wife said she
now said he)
ow said she

(tiptop said he
don't stop said she
oh no said he)
go slow said she

(cccome?said he
ummm said she)
you're divine!said he
(you are Mine said she

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is really a cute poem...
Lisa

Anonymous said...

If you can quote e.e. cummings, you must know Jack Kerouac "On The Orad" and "Dharma Bums" and Alan Ginsburg, T.S. Eliot, Larence Ferlingetti, Ayn Rand, Anais Nin, Dylan Thomas, etc.  We're on the same page lol!  CATHY
http://journals.aol.com/luddie343/DARETOTHINK/